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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

There is a disproportion on the shoulders of the women, the right shoulder is larger than the left one and the legs may be larger than they should, but I can't really tell.

Also the jaw of the men should a little bit shorter or the back of the head bigger.

I would recommend you to apply one vanishing point perspective to your drawing in order to give the feeling which character is more next to us.

The other things are well done and I like them, so keep it going and try to apply what I told you.

I hope you do not hate me for this critique, Borja